omg i’ve only just started the dark tourney arc BUT I LOVE THE ENTIRE CAST SO FAR AND KUWABARA IS SUCH A BIG DUMB BABY BUT AT THE SAME THAT FEELS MEAN TO SAY BECAUSE OF ALL HIS HEART?????? WHAT THE HECKIE KISSES HIS FACE
Something small for the stream after the commission was done. Once again, the Kane children.
Shark needs to work on his delivery. And his choice in mates.
[CRIES A LOT]
Kaito these are your new allies. They’re actually both 5.
hey friends let me tell you something about the word “said.”
it is a good word.
teachers, in school, will often give you an “instead of said” list because they want you to vary your writing and be familiar with your other options; that doesn’t mean you should never use “said” or look down upon the people that do.
because the fact of the matter is your dialogue should do the speaking.
is your character boasting? show it in the dialogue, or show it in their action. is your character yelling? show it in the dialogue, or show it in their action. is your character joking? make it clear that they are in the dialogue, or make it clear that they are in their action.
more often than not complicated dialogue tags are more intrusive upon your writing. it’s like you’re walking smoothly along and suddenly you trip. your tag shouldn’t be bolder than the part of the sentence that’s actually important.
"said" is a good, invisible word. vary your sentences, yes; but don’t scoff at those who use "said."
you don’t you just kind of lie there on the floor and stare at the ceiling and cry, whispering in a broken voice, “anytime you like”
i put on my new $55 boots and launched off the faces of my enemies into space
i can’t believe kamishiro ryoga is fucking dead